Amazingly, if I do say so myself, I managed not to read the comments on my Salon.com article that came out over the weekend. This was purely self-preservation. The editor had warned me that people would write copious and awful things in response because the subject matter is controversial (being jealous of other women when I already have one beautiful, perfect kid? What’s wrong with me?), and I knew she was right. In fact, before consenting to have the essay published, I thought long and hard, again, about whether I wanted to put that piece of myself out in the world. And I decided I did, but that I would make every effort to resist reading the comments. And so, while I did glance obsessively at the stats (how many Facebook shares? How many Twitter shares?), I did not click on that little speaking-bubble icon as it jumped from 10 to 20 to 30 to 46. Not once. I did ask a friend to do a Readers Digest?style synopsis for me, and that was awesome. But otherwise, I did not read the comments because I felt I could predict what mean things would be said: You’re a bitch, you’re selfish, you have “first-world” problems, you’re ungrateful. There would be disdain, and more than a little anger directed at me.
I get that. I do.
I don’t claim to be perfect, but what I was going for in the essay, and what I think came through if you were looking upon the piece charitably, was an expression of feelings that I wasn’t and still am not proud of, but was and am trying to work through. I think ultimately that admitting to having shitty, petty feelings is something I can be proud of, and trying to work through them, something of which I’m prouder still. I don’t regret a thing about publishing it, but I of course do worry about what’s being said about me. Or perhaps worried is the wrong word, because, online, in this world we live in, that article isn’t really representative of me. It’s this persona that I created and that has been created about me, and it bears very little resemblance to the actual me, sitting on my couch in sweatpants, in need of a shower, my left contact lens feeling sticky, thinking about getting up and getting another cup of tea as I type.
I say that because, while I did not read the comments (have I mentioned that yet?), comments have of course reached me. Friends have written directly with all kinds of lovely and supportive words (God, I love my friends) and some strangers have tagged me on Twitter with nice things to say. Others have been not so nice, or perhaps, just more misunderstanding. A woman on this blog who has suffered terribly with infertility sounded restrained but also called my parenting into question, like maybe wanting a second child makes me somehow not present or thankful for the first (Oh my dear L, how could I ever not be grateful for you?). And one Twitter comment that at first irked me and then cracked me up referred to we women nowadays as dissatisfied with our lot because we need “the perfect Mummy Instagram life.” (If she spent ten minutes in my messy house she’d know that very little about me is mainstream, perfect, or Instagram-worthy!)
But of course, that reader isn’t in my house with me; she doesn’t really know me. Nor I her. And I don’t know the infertile woman who posted here on my blog reminding me to be present with my kid because I have it better off than she does. She doesn’t know that actually I’m a very nice person and my heart goes out to her for her losses. It does. And yes, reader, in case you are wondering, too: I am grateful for my kid and I cherish him, I promise.
I think it’s important to remember that anything ever published on the Web is going to be only a part of the picture. As writers of personal essays that get published on the Web, we put these little slices of ourselves into the world and ask them to be scrutinized. It’s kind of like showing someone a dirty fingernail and asking them to guess whether the whole body is clean; you can’t actually tell. That’s the risk of personal writing, and it may also be the strength of it. We’re all a lot more interesting, and scandalous, when we’re only revealing part of things. But add to that the conundrum of the Web–anonymity, viral insanity, and unlimited access–and you have a muddy and incomplete picture of a person that some people want to take as complete.
But I must say I think writing has always been like that. Even in fiction, read from books, from the public library, it’s so tempting to think that the author is the same as the protagonist, and if the protagonist behaves badly that the author has behaved badly, too. This has always been true, but Goodreads, Amazon, and comment threads have made that author all the more accessible (and vulnerable). Is this a good thing?
I will say that a nice thing has happened for me since I wrote and published that essay over the weekend. I’ve softened a bit. I feel sometimes, as a writer, that I get this little tool to help me through the world. When things go badly for me, I often think, but I can write about it. And writing about–and coming out about, because it’s very, very personal–my infertility has helped me shape my understanding of it. I feel both less obsessed with it and more content with what I’ve got, and also brave for having said it all in the first place.
Thank you, friends and readers, for your support.
I applaud you for being honest and truthful. That is the absolute best we can be as writers. I also think fertility, jealousy, miscarriage are all topics which need more truth. Bravo to you for not reading the comments. That takes some serious strength and good mental health.
Thank you, Susan. I really appreciate it. x
Hey look, my cousin has an article in Salon.com!
Hey look! Hi, Anne!
To my mind the funniest of the comments – and, yes, I did read them Suz – was the woman who asked querulously if the party after the wedding should have been called a reception. Why would one bother to comment on such a minor thing? Perhaps she found everything else you wrote perfectly wonderful! As did I…….
Here here! There is a school of thought among professional bloggers that comments should be disabled as a general rule. If my blog had any modicum of popularity outside of my friends I would probably have disabled them by now myself. I will point out that there is one gleaming beacon of hope when it comes to online comments though; Reddit. For some reason the self regulating community on Reddit has managed to create an atmosphere of acceptance & support with a fair dose of constructive criticism. I did a search and it appears someone has already posted a link to your article in the /infertility subreddit. There are a number of comments already and they are all safe for your perusal.
Thanks, T. Reddit is more of a mystery to me than Instagram, but this was nice!
Hi Susie, I really enjoyed reading the Salon article. The article helped me reflect once again about the pain of my own struggles with getting pregnant, the struggles with producing breast milk and not having a second child. Over time I have gone from a state of grief/loss to acceptance to a memory/understanding of how I used to feel. I’m not sure if this is at all understandable to you, but your writing somehow helped me process the memories in a different way than I have before. Thank you for that.?
Thank you, my friend, for responding.
Your salon piece was right on……only those who haven’t been there could criticize. It is such a visceral experience ( fertility, pregnancy, miscarriage) and you capture that. Keep on writing! You may like our blog beyond the egg timer @ psychologytoday. Com.
Thank you, and thanks for the referral! I will check out Beyond the Egg Timer.
You absolutely were and are brave for writing and publishing that piece. Naturally, after reading this post, I went and read every damned comment, and here’s my take. People want vastly different things from things they read. And it seems that they often expect a single piece of writing to be everything (entertaining, relate-able, choc full of self-improvement tips) instead of what it is: a single glimpse. I adore you revealing your messy parts for the rest of us to relate to. It’s no wonder that it shocks a lot of people into judgement and anger–we’re trained from early on to hide those messy parts and “think positive” and “make lemonade” and “be grateful.” But you already know my obsession with my own and everyone else’s mess. And I’m wildly impressed with your restraint on comment reading.
Thanks, AHM. This was really nice to read and really astute (as usual!). xo
I’m glad I came here and saw this because I was planning on reaching out on the Salon article itself!
I manage social media for a sperm-friendly lube, so I share infertility articles all the time. I have sifted through so many but yours stands out head and shoulders above the rest. I knew our fans would be moved by it, but the response was even better than I expected.
The women who needed to hear what you said are the ones whose reactions matter most. And their reactions were all of overwhelming gratitude. So, on behalf of them, thank you.